Ed, that is the first chapter.
In the manuscript, it is two pages and set the stage for the story. It starts with an anomaly in Montana. In the book, it is five pages.
In chapter 2, the hero is introduced and the story begins to unravel from there.
Your going to have to buy the book to read chapter 2.
The entire book was 210,000 words and when the editors got done with it, it shrunk to 191,000 words - 640 pages.
I have had one person complain about certain things in the book. This person told me there is no airstrip next to a beach and the stones are different than described; he also could not believe I wrote a book. I have known him for over 20 years and he has had a jones for near everything I have done...including my Cobra, my hunting -- everything.
But, I do not hold it against him, it is the way he is.
Anyway, hope you buy the book. If you do, I'd be honored to sign it for you.
