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Hal,
Great story, I could visualize every turn of the wheel thru your words. I really enjoyed it. I think you had a lot of fun and a gift for writing. Having been in the paper I will be the first to tell you that sometimes what is written is often spiced up to make it more colorful. So don't judge Hal to harshly only a great story can you make you dislike his actions just as well like them. Just my own thoughts and I have been wrong at least once today already.
Jim
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